I like the idea of showing the effects of GREED, and what better way to do it than by showing someone who has lost everything.

I want my audience to feel sorry for the homeless guy. This will be achieved best by the colours and costume of the film. I also want the dialogue to be very sad and emotional to start, but as it goes on I want the audience to realise that it his is own fault that he is now like this.

I like the dirty, unshaven look on this homeless guy, but I think that the top is a bit forced, the rips look too perfect for someone who has not changed for months. But i like the dirty effect. I think that making the clothes baggy for the character makes him look small and sunken which is what i want to go for.

I like the color of this short, I like the grey look to show the dingy coldness, It also represents his life and feeling as it is very dull and dark. I think my color would be a lot more grey to add more emotion. The paper boxes add to the horror of sleeping on the floor which would be a nice touch to use. 

This image shows how Homeless guys are not accepted. The lady is trying to ignore him and is also moving her bag away from him. This could be a talking point in my dialogue to show how they are not accepted by some people.